Here's the intro to my newest story! Hope you enjoy it!
“That’s right. Phenomenon.” I chuckle quietly
to myself, alone save this recording device. “That’s what they call me.
Phenomenon. Fastest man on the planet. And not just because I can move quickly.
“It
was a long time ago,” I spoke into the microphone. “I was young, we all were at
one point. Thing is, I was young in a place I never should have been. The
government at that time called themselves the OCG, or Organized Continental
Government. They were interested in lots of things, clean energy, food for
everyone, stuff like that. At least, that’s what they told the public. In
reality, they were the same as all power hungry rulers, since the dawn of time.
They knew their time on the top of the heap would end soon, and they were
desperate to stop it. Into this pool of desperation, I was forced. I guess I
shouldn’t say forced though. At the time I wanted it. I was young, like I said
before. I was young, and my name was Josiah Greenwich. I suppose I’m supposed
to record everything that happened, so I will begin at the beginning, where all
good stories seem to begin. It was the year 2999, exactly one year away from
the biggest celebration on the planet. And there I was, seventeen, gullible,
and full of passion for my country.”
I like it. I can't see and typos. I'm eagerly awaiting the next part.
ReplyDeleteAwesome! :D iLike it. :) I do suggest that you change the font or background color though. The blue against the grey is really hard to read for me
ReplyDeleteOh okay. Sorry 'bout that. :) And thanks Raptor!
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